Good Story line but not as fast and witty and the really Rory would be. Logan would never just walk up to her like that after what had happened. It would have to happen a different way and he wouldn't call her Ace. When he is being series he always called her Rory. So fare so good! O and Rory NEVER called her Mom Mum
I really enjoyed this story! Though I felt the end was slightly rushed - good work though:) I really want to know where they end up on their honeymoon in your story!
Thanks again.
I really like this story.
LOVE IT!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
I REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY
I just started reading your story and I really like it. One thing that is absolutely bothering me is grammar (especially "your" instead of "you're".... It just gets on my nerves. Good job though! I can't wait to read the rest.
“My, my the lovely Finn has returned to me.” Miss Patty said pinching him on the bottom.
“I’m so sorry, I honestly didn’t mean to. I have to go that way now.” Finn said walking away and rubbing the spot where she pinched him. OMG THIS LINE HAD ME LAUGHING SO HARD THAT I WAS CRYING! GREAT JOB
aww that was cute! :D
Love it! That was the perfect proposal for Collin ans Steph
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Great chapters! I cannot wait to read more!
Great chapter...can't wait to read more soon...it should be fun with everyone in Stars Hollow...!!!
I realy liked your story up until the last chapter it just totally went in a different direction first you had them getting back together saying that they loved each other and all of a sudden you had them fighting after they read the letters I was so very confused? It was good up until then and in the end it got a little better. But it's a good job for your first story.
Author's Response: I understand what your saying completely. I just felt that, they can't just forget everything and get straight back together. Too much time has pasted, they need to sorta get to know each other again.
But thank you for letting me know how you felt.
the beginning was hard to get through, the ending was much easier
great story...can't wait to read more!
I like it. its cute, I like there banter too
Awwwwwwwww those letters are soo sweet! Awesome writing! Cant wait for the update.
Love it. I hope you update soon. They need to get back together ASAP.
OMG! This new chapter is so wonderful! The letters are such a cute idea for Rory and Logan, because they are both jounalists and of course it is easier for them to write it down! It's so wonderful that they feel the same way!
Keep writing!
I like the chapter, but maybe you rushed some parts a little bit. Anyway great story.
great chapter. Looking forward to more.